A readthrough of up to 5000 words + a 30 minute Zoom call to discuss: $175
Word count overage will be invoiced via PayPal. Please fill out this form.
If I'd been reading your story from the beginning, what are some things I would know at this point, which would be helpful to me in understanding this scene?
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Do you have any particular concerns about this piece?
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Sometimes we're at a part of our process where we want to limit critical feedback, and there's nothing wrong with saying that. What kind of feedback are you looking for?
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And also...
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Please format your writing as a .doc or .docx file of 5000 words or less, attach it to an email, and send it to susan@bischplease.com
I'm looking forward to reading and discussing your work.